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申请英国留学如何写出的文书?

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  要知道,那些学校的招生官员是的从业者,在他们的职业生涯中阅读过无数学生的申请材料,他们能够从你的字里行间读懂你的心思。下面安侨留学小编为您盘点申请英国留学如何写出的文书?

  一、如何写出的文书:

  1、文书要有真正的内容,重点要突出

  关于这一点,大家不妨自己体会一下:阅读一篇一千字左右的中文文章,只要不是特别晦涩的文字和内容,我们能够快明白作者想要表达的意思。因此不难想象,作为母语是英语的招生官员,他们必然能在短的时间内找到文章的精华所在。

  2、文书是展现自己的好平台

  申请者往往把更多的精力放在雅思考试和过分挑剔学校专业上,其实这种想法是片面的。正如世界上没有两片树叶是完全相同的,每个申请者的性格特点、特长、学习动机甚至未来职业规划,都不可能是相同的。而这些可以充分展示个人特性的申请材料,往往只能通过申请人的个人陈述、推荐信展现出来。学校在未能和申请本人交流的情况下,只能是通过每个申请者的文书来端倪一二。

  3、不同大学口味不同

  每个大学对学生都会有不同的喜好,比如LSE(伦敦政治经济学院)就十分看重学生的全面发展,有独立思考的能力,喜欢在国际化环境中学习和工作,有能力去应对不同的挑战;南安普顿就看重宝宝的语言能力,而且喜欢乐于与世界学生交流的留学生,看重沟通能力。而纽卡就看重宝宝的诚信,宝宝的上述优点如何让招生大大们得知呢,还是要回归到个人文书上,所以不要吝啬对自己的赞美之词,该出手时就出手。

  4、挖掘亮点,深入再深入

  留学生朋友要明白,个人陈述是你发挥自身才华的机会,有针对性的筹划、认真的写作是关乎到申请成败的环节,因此,务必保证你的文书特点鲜明,思想深入,富有感染力。

  二、文书千万不能这样写:

  1、喜欢使用华丽的辞藻和生词

  文书重要的不是辞藻,而是通过文书体现一个人的精神。使用华丽的辞藻,特别容易造成误解,其实作为国际学生,我们能够准确表达自己即可,不要瞎用连自己都无法准确把握的生词。

  2、因为文化差异的问题,词不达意

  例如你说你崇拜的人是屈原,但如果你不交代这个人是谁,老外是无法理解你到底在说什么。所以,申请不能站在自己的角度考虑问题,而是要更多站在阅读者的角度考虑你说的这个东西别人能不能理解。

  3、不会讲故事

  让你的文书像故事一样具有吸引力。多人也许不太看重这点,实际要想写好上硕士和博士的文书,你一样要会讲故事,因为只有故事才有吸引力。

  4、文书没有主线和逻辑

  大部分学生的文书都是一开始说自己是谁,然后下面说自己学习成绩如何,课外活动如何,然后又说自己做了哪些研究,就是我要申请啥学校和专业。这种思路无论怎么写,都是普通的留学文书,是简历的重复,给审核者无法留下深刻的印象。好的文书是根据学生的情况,先挖掘亮点和主线,确定思路,然后在某一、两个点上进行深入剖析。

  5、抄袭

  每年都有童鞋因为抄袭申请文章被大学发现,给予重罚。现在一些大学有文章库,输入你的文章,如果发现和库中的文章重合,就有面临被重罚的危险。这个要小心哦。

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